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Almost everyone has a different opinion of what a hero is or what makes a hero. How can I fix that non-parallel sentence?

Posted on February 7, 2013

For starters, the sentence is fine the way it is. But if you are concerned about parallelism, you could write it this way: “Almost everyone has a different opinion of what a hero is made of or of what a hero is.”

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